Sunday, December 6, 2009
Hello, once again Harry Potter got me into trouble he can't do spells and when he did a wrong spell it made me go up in the air and crash down on Hagrid. My wand broke once again because of Harry Potter so I have to buy a new one. Wands are so expensive. I am too lazy to go to the shop and buy a new one so i should just ride my longstick 300 and go to the shop to buy the wand. I should tell my wand to steal me some money. Hmmmm...... I should do that so i could earn more money. I am going to kill Hagrid today by making a spell and lifting him in the air and throw him down but he is too fat to pick him so I need extra work.
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Lots of un -on sentences, otherwise good.
ReplyDeleteGood job, dont steal
ReplyDeletei liked how you showed your thoughts about Hagrid. I never knew that Snape had that opinion! keep writing, and you'll notice how you ca nbe better at writing. use some descriptive words to catch the reader's attention!
ReplyDeleteahhah!!! snape i dont like you tooo !!!! ill protect hagrid !!!! and haha i never new u felt that way hagrid is coool i thought u only hated me?????
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of the entry caught my attention because it is interesting and exiting. The entry doesn't have much of a introduction, body, and conclusion. I liked that you put in how expensive the wand was... I suggest that you capitalize the beginning of your sentences.
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