Tuesday, December 8, 2009
RON WEASLY!!!!!! He once again got me and himself into trouble. He almost broke my wand even after I bought a new wand. The wand was so expensive luckily my longstick 300 was there to save me. You see the problem was that me was I was teaching them how to potions and he slept in class so he didn't pay attention when it was time to make potions so when he started it was alright but when he put the wrong thing it exploded and I was in the air and about to crash on a rock luckily longstick 300 came in time and it saved me, but when i was coming down I was in such speed that longstick 300 couldn't bring me up so I came crashing down on Hagrid. So Hagrid got hurt so he is in the hospital for a week and my longstick is getting fixed and my wand got saved and well me I landed I landed on fat,overweighted, clumsy guy, Hagrid.
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ha ha! this blog is funny. it did capture my attention, but make sure you have a conclusion. I liked it because Snape expressed his feelings about Ron and Hagrid. Some Suggestions: Catch your grammar and spelling and punctuation! (Mr. Smith, this is the REAL response)
ReplyDeletethis post captured my attention with the phrase, RON WEASLY!!!He once got me and himself into trouble. It made me wonder, What did he do? Also I think that you did a pretty good job on the intro-body-conclusion, but i think it would be better if you kind of showed the essay format more clearly. Also, i really liked it because you described everything very well. Oh, 1 suggestion, try to fix your grammar mistakes.. :P
ReplyDelete-Brian